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    Is this shot(composition) acceptable on database?

  • #2
    Needs to be portrait orientation and cropped a little looser.

    While it's a cool shot the landscape version violates the 1/3 2/3 composition rules for both the moon and helicopter.

    I think you might get closer to 2/3 1/3 in portrait orientation...

    But I'm just talking art and not the rules of this forum.
    Les règles de l'aviation de base découragent de longues périodes de dur tirer vers le haut.

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    • #3
      A careful crop might make it acceptable. Here are 2 of my photos that may be of similar composition:
      (Disclaimer: I'm not a screener)

      [photoid=7504478]
      [photoid=7507372]

      Sometimes it depends on the preference of an individual screener...

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      • #4
        I agree with 3WE's comment about portrait format for the helicopter. For the other shot I prefer the landscape version.
        If it 'ain't broken........ Don't try to mend it !

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        • #5
          Is it okay now?

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          • #6
            Are you familiar with the 1/3 2/3 rule?

            It should be cropped less, not more!

            The helicopter should be 1/3 up from the bottom, 1/3 from the right...

            The sun/ moon should be 1/3 from the top, 1/3 from the left.

            With them right on the edge as you have it now, it's not pleasant.
            Les règles de l'aviation de base découragent de longues périodes de dur tirer vers le haut.

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