Poor lighting. Help?

[Geoffrey]

Actually it is nice enough for me.. :)
http://www.jetphotos.net/viewreject.php?id=66277

Should I appeal or can I make any improvements?
Thanks in advance!

[mikecweb]

The light is to distracting. Takes alot away from the photo. Makes the plane look shadowed. When taking long exposures at night try not to include the actual light but let it cast light on the subject. Does make any sense? :(

[Geoffrey]

Thanks. It makes sense!